Tuesday 22 November 2011

Poem from Charlotte to Ms. Hancock


To Ms. Hancock,

Sullen school children drearily walk like zombies into a gray loveless classroom  
Young ones stiffly slump into puke green age stained plastic seats
A collective of math and science weighing them down like earth to Atlas
Heaven like in fashion a golden shovel lifts the unwanted extra scholarly baggage  
Light appears after the gargantuan treacherous trek of math and science
Appearing like Jesus to a poor and ravenous group of lepers
Paints and lipsticks applied with a reckless abandon on a wrinkled face appear
Delightful English rinses away the sickening taste of dreary math and science
Hemingway, Shakespeare, and Salinger ease the troubled minds of the literature starved
 Hands shoot up like fireworks on the fourth of July
Minds wrap around like snakes to challenging problems zealously   
Soon class is over abruptly and viciously 
Depressed children dutifully pack and rearrange unwanted science and socials books  
 A teacher’s face emits heat and love from a never ending goodbye smile
30 students shuffle sluggishly toward socials downtrodden 

From,
Charlotte

3 comments:

  1. This poem is really good, I like all the imagery thats given

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  2. I like the way you constructed your poem! Very well done Ari :D

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